“It looks like a woman,” Jase murmured. “What’s she wearing, a nightgown?”
The
fabric did appear to be quite thin, or perhaps that was because of the rays of
fading light behind her. “What’s she doing?”
Jase
shook his head. “She appears to be
looking for something . . .”
My
breath froze in my throat.
She
was coming toward us, toward the bridge.
Her eyes were downcast, searching the banks of the creek as she glided
along.
“Waahhhmaaahh.” The sound was louder.
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20 comments:
An apparition so sad searching for her crying baby? Good eight.
Really fascinating and your description is ever so spooky! Terrific snippet...
It gave me chills.
Thanks Charmaine!
You made my day, Veronica. =)
Good!
And she's moving closer . . .
Nicely chilling scene!
scary stuff well written
Thanks, Sarah. I love scary ...
Thanks so much, Sue!
Eeerie! The snippet gave me a shivery feeling. Nice eight!
Ooo, creepy! Loved it. Definitely wanna know where this is going. Great 8!
Great eight! Sad and spooky.
Great eight -- sad and spooky.
Thanks, it is that, but hopefully more spooky...
Great! Thanks, Ute.
Glad to hear that, karen!
Very suspenseful! I bet Jase was as freaked out as Stevie when they realized the apparition was headed in their direction! I like a good spooky story :)
I suspect she's looking for the baby.
Great eight.
I really enjoyed the description of the woman's clothing, it's like I could see it.
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