Jase stopped talking and followed my
gaze. “What is it, did you see something again?”
I
shook my head; I didn’t know how to
describe the awful feeling of sadness that had washed over me at the sight of
the school's tall, brick arch. “I don’t know,” I
whispered. “I didn’t see anything, but I
feel something.”
“You never finished telling me about your
dream," he said.
“There was a girl with long
white hair—wild white hair—and she was standing beneath an archway just like
that one. And she was
swishing back and forth like a little girl’s rag doll in the hands of a big
mean bully.”
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16 comments:
Aw, poor thing, dreams can be so powerful.
Sounds like her dreams, her bad feeling, and the schoolhouse are connected. Nice eight.
great snippet! The part about the girl with the wild white hair at the end really had me on edge! (in a good way lol)
Your description are always so spooky, as in really well done! Another excellent excerpt!
Spooky. I like their dialogue--not too grown up, you know what I mean? Good 8, Ann! :-)
Thanks, Teresa.
I really appreciate your comments, Veronica!
Thanks, Lauren. Glad to hear it, LOL.
They sure are, Millie.
Can't they? Especially nightmares...
Spooky snippet, Ann. Sounds like a good tale. :)
Sounds like a scary flashback.... I'm feeling apprehensive for her! Great snippet :)
Thanks, Siobhan. Glad you stopped by!
Thank you, Susan. I appreciate that!
Now the reader has to be a bit worried for Stevie and Jase - nice spooky snippet and excellent description to help me visualize it all.
Another intriguing eight there.
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