tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post8357653766153734935..comments2024-01-09T04:19:04.080-06:00Comments on Ann's Afterthoughts ~ Ann Swann ~ Suspense and More: Stutter Creek #WeekendWritingWarriors #8Sunday SnippetAnn Swannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-59218477474496285552013-03-31T23:11:14.523-05:002013-03-31T23:11:14.523-05:00Thanks, Teresa.Thanks, Teresa.Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-39004569237842144292013-03-31T22:31:45.792-05:002013-03-31T22:31:45.792-05:00Why do first loves hang on like they do? And it w...Why do first loves hang on like they do? And it was a good image--drawing together the loss of her dad and the memories of that first crush. Nicely done! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-75102029266859219642013-03-31T18:46:38.214-05:002013-03-31T18:46:38.214-05:00Yes, it could be deadly!
Yes, it could be deadly!<br />Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-21409234532943749202013-03-31T18:45:43.434-05:002013-03-31T18:45:43.434-05:00Thanks, Vivien!
Thanks, Vivien!<br />Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-75683987068283120972013-03-31T17:15:30.030-05:002013-03-31T17:15:30.030-05:00I like the way she returns to her past to help her...I like the way she returns to her past to help her sort out the future, its a very natural thing to do... but not always a wise idea :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-34663171029648225642013-03-31T16:53:57.104-05:002013-03-31T16:53:57.104-05:00Hopefully he'll be there to help her pick up t...Hopefully he'll be there to help her pick up the pieces. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-87488310188453387822013-03-31T13:24:09.625-05:002013-03-31T13:24:09.625-05:00Sure is rough...she has a long way to go.Sure is rough...she has a long way to go.Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-28936733704624914322013-03-31T13:23:21.016-05:002013-03-31T13:23:21.016-05:00Thanks, Elaine. =)Thanks, Elaine. =)Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-73337061604678854052013-03-31T13:19:54.452-05:002013-03-31T13:19:54.452-05:00Maybe they will... =)Maybe they will... =)Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-57033288365897944082013-03-31T13:19:29.320-05:002013-03-31T13:19:29.320-05:00Thnanks, Veronica!Thnanks, Veronica!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-89523174856227583242013-03-31T13:18:56.714-05:002013-03-31T13:18:56.714-05:00Isn't that the truth?Isn't that the truth?Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-6593900725061354112013-03-31T11:39:19.200-05:002013-03-31T11:39:19.200-05:00That's a rough combination of feelings for her...That's a rough combination of feelings for her. Throwing her first love/crush into the mix could leave her reeling. Hope it's a good reeling.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-49587029454049194912013-03-31T11:38:35.477-05:002013-03-31T11:38:35.477-05:00I love reunion stories. nice excerpt.I love reunion stories. nice excerpt.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-15735977434580983102013-03-31T11:08:46.822-05:002013-03-31T11:08:46.822-05:00Some people you just can't completely shake, c...Some people you just can't completely shake, can you?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-88448674502358142942013-03-31T10:44:46.376-05:002013-03-31T10:44:46.376-05:00A teenage dream, rekindled. Looking forward to th...A teenage dream, rekindled. Looking forward to the next instalment! Hope they get back together.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-56776212617208526712013-03-31T10:44:28.172-05:002013-03-31T10:44:28.172-05:00Sounds like even if he was a dream guy in her yout...Sounds like even if he was a dream guy in her youth, he's still pretty dreamy (going by previous excerpts). Excellent snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-71640163885151790622013-03-31T10:13:41.524-05:002013-03-31T10:13:41.524-05:00Thank you so much, India!Thank you so much, India!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-31657777505500719492013-03-31T10:12:06.972-05:002013-03-31T10:12:06.972-05:00Thanks, Missi!Thanks, Missi!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-63910284179734888982013-03-31T10:11:51.753-05:002013-03-31T10:11:51.753-05:00Thank you, Charmaine. You're so kind. =)Thank you, Charmaine. You're so kind. =)Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-29137842509956725142013-03-31T10:11:17.176-05:002013-03-31T10:11:17.176-05:00You are so right, Gemma!You are so right, Gemma!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-3444787465542095462013-03-31T09:24:16.752-05:002013-03-31T09:24:16.752-05:00Oh man, who doesn't remember their first love?...Oh man, who doesn't remember their first love? Even if it was just a teenage crush over the summer. I remember my first real kiss like it was yesterday. Sometimes I can still feel the pain of a bitter divorce and the sorrow and fear of losing my best friend, my dad. It kinda felt like what you described above. Nicely done.India Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655550748159559852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-53140076676479811272013-03-31T09:03:58.825-05:002013-03-31T09:03:58.825-05:00Great eight! LOVE this story!Great eight! LOVE this story!Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-61785222149521301892013-03-31T07:55:00.076-05:002013-03-31T07:55:00.076-05:00Lovely, Ann, a back story told with just enough in...Lovely, Ann, a back story told with just enough information to bring the reader up to date.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261030989801364799.post-11301559875058759642013-03-31T05:44:33.670-05:002013-03-31T05:44:33.670-05:00It sound like she could really use his warmth righ...It sound like she could really use his warmth right now, l'm willing her to relax and enjoy him. Great snippet.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.com